Wednesday, January 28, 2009

The Sun Rising Plog #2

The Sun Rising
by John Donne

BUSY old fool, unruly Sun,
Why dost thou thus,
Through windows, and through curtains, call on us ?
Must to thy motions lovers' seasons run ?
Saucy pedantic wretch, go chide
Late school-boys and sour prentices,
Go tell court-huntsmen that the king will ride,
Call country ants to harvest offices ;
Love, all alike, no season knows nor clime,
Nor hours, days, months, which are the rags of time.

Thy beams so reverend, and strong
Why shouldst thou think ?
I could eclipse and cloud them with a wink,
But that I would not lose her sight so long.
If her eyes have not blinded thine,
Look, and to-morrow late tell me,
Whether both th' Indias of spice and mine
Be where thou left'st them, or lie here with me.
Ask for those kings whom thou saw'st yesterday,
And thou shalt hear, "All here in one bed lay."

She's all states, and all princes I ;
Nothing else is ;
Princes do but play us ; compared to this,
All honour's mimic, all wealth alchemy.
Thou, Sun, art half as happy as we,
In that the world's contracted thus ;
Thine age asks ease, and since thy duties be
To warm the world, that's done in warming us.
Shine here to us, and thou art everywhere ;
This bed thy center is, these walls thy sphere.

Commentary:
In "The Sun Rising", John Donne creates an annoyed and angry tone that shifts to accepting to promote the theme that love is more important than anything else in the world. The speaker, speaking to the sun through apostrophe, first feels that the sun is imposing on his life, but then he welcomes the warmth and power of the sun as a way to help his love prosper. This poem is utterly romantic, though Donne still manages to show his condescending and angry side.
In the very beginning of the poem, Donne uses apostrophe, addressing the sun as though it is barging in on his blissful, quiet moments with his lover. Donne ironically begins a very poetic and romantically titled poem basically yelling at nature; the sun forces people to work, to get out of bed, etc. Diction such as "old fool," "unruly," and "wretch" creates the impression that the speaker is angry. In this stanza, the speaker just wants the sun to go away.
In the second stanza, the speaker acknowledges that he can't ignore the sun. He considers his love to be more important than his dislike of the sun. Throughout the stanza, Donne uses language related to the bedroom, such as "lie here with me" and "all here in one bed lay." Donne puts up with the sun because he would rather have his lover. He says, "But that I would not lose her sight for so long," which exaggerates his need for his lover. He can't stop looking at her for the length of a wink. Overall, Donne still promotes an annoyed tone, but it is more balanced by his love, which clearly is very important to him.
In the last stanza, Donne's tone changes to accepting. He welcomes the sun, saying "shine here to us." Instead of butting in, the sun now accentuates their love. Donne realizes that it's the sun's job to "warm the world," and so by warming their hearts through love, the sun is actually slave to their love. This stanza is much more positive, but Donne still retains a condescending tone as he tells the sun that it revolves around his bedroom in the last line. Obviously Donne values love, but he actually goes as far as saying it is the most important thing in the universe. He can ignore the sun and all other obligations that come with morning because the simple pleasure of being with his love is of utmost importance.
Donne gets angry at the sun and at nature, but this poem shows his thought process. He develops his anger into an understanding of what he values in the world. If we can all pinpoint the one thing in this world that we value most and go after it, devoting everything to that one thing, I'm sure we would all be much happier.

6 comments:

sdub said...

wow i really agree with what you have said and our group had this poem as well. Did you notice the sudden change of mood as well from being frustrated and angry with the sun to being more accepting and open with the sun.
Did you get that when the man stated go leave us alone because when him and his lover were together they were their own sun?

Kristin said...

Aww, i agree; this poem is so romantic! I mean really, the sun revolves around them? hyperbole, much? but still, it's so cute how he gets angry at something as important as the sun because it interrupts him and his lover.
i really liked your analysis because i didn't realize how ridiculous some of the things in the poem were. such as his anger towards the sun and how his thoughts develop. honestly, i thought this poem was boring at first. and i like your last statement. it's so enlightening! to value something and pursue it really is happiness

cmosier said...

I know. This guy's still a (I don't know if I can say the word on here, but I bet you can guess it Kristin, and it's really more of an acronym)but in a cute way! awwwwwwwww It's like that SNL sketch with the 2 A-holes doing stuff. They like each other, but they're pretty bogus to everyone else.

sdub said...

wow i didnt under stand that oh are thy chewing gum and say what do you think of that babe all the time???

fadwa_saidwhat said...

I really like your interpretation because I was pretty confused with this poem. I like how you said "In the second stanza, the speaker acknowledges that he can't ignore the sun. He considers his love to be more important than his dislike of the sun." Because I honestly never saw that. So well said! I really like this poem now. And his everlasting love, regardless of how much he hates the sun is helped shown through your interpretation. :)

H-Dub said...

this was a really good interpretation. i agree with you on how romantic it was and with kristin on the whole hyperbole thing of the sun revolving around them. i thought it was pretty fluffy in all the wording and how ms d explained it in class as the two laying in bed with the sun shining in and like a kind of fluffy scene of white pillows and blankets and it kind of creates that in the reader's mind. good analysis!